Thursday, December 6, 2007
Wednesday, December 5, 2007
My Colour Poem
Red
The COLOUR RED
Colour red is the colour belonging to the number 8
Over the top with anger
Lifting heart pulse when you see the colour
Overwhelming power
Up and away
Red is my favorite colour.
Raging anger belongs to the colour red.
Endness fires colour is red.
Death belongs to the colour red because of the blood.
The COLOUR RED
Colour red is the colour belonging to the number 8
Over the top with anger
Lifting heart pulse when you see the colour
Overwhelming power
Up and away
Red is my favorite colour.
Raging anger belongs to the colour red.
Endness fires colour is red.
Death belongs to the colour red because of the blood.
Sunday, December 2, 2007
Essay comment
I thinks this was good because I wrote a couple of sentences on everything that you need most.
It was also good because I think it had a good hook and I like the looks of the story because it was a contract.
Some bad parts were that I didn't put that many adjective.
But some other good thing are that I shared with lots of other people and made it better and better.
From Samuel the maker of this story.
It was also good because I think it had a good hook and I like the looks of the story because it was a contract.
Some bad parts were that I didn't put that many adjective.
But some other good thing are that I shared with lots of other people and made it better and better.
From Samuel the maker of this story.
Samuels Essay
An Underwater house
“Hey we finally have our own underwater house” this is what people will be saying in the year 3000. Can you imagine an advanced underwater house capable staying underwater for more than 1000 years? They will first be zapped with a machine, which makes them breathe underwater. Kids will be playing with seahorses and fishes in their air light cloths. Mums will be cleaning their houses and dads will be in their waterproof suits going to work in the sea living development. This houses made by the (SLD) Sea Living Development have lots of special features some of them are air pipes for the air to come in and a food chamber for the food to come in and there is a pipe for the people of the house to go above ground and a energy plant to get energy to the house.
Now I will tell you about these amazing features. (This is not for someone that has heart effects)
Get ready to exclaim!!!
Water will come through a WC1 (water cleaner machine the V1 is put in because if it is just WC it sounds like toilet) first sea water comes into the machine and then the salt in the water will be gone by being destroyed by turbines and clean water comes into the kitchen and hot water will come in by the cold water being heated by a boiler which is powered by solar energy or they can get a WCV2 which is a better version of the WCV1 because it stores the salt and sends it to the meat and vegetables and also stores it for cooking.
This is a 300% salt free salt cleaner and it is pollution free it is a good machine to support the environment
The energy comes from two ways the tidal/hydro power and the solar power the hydropower will be easy to get because it is water all over the place. The sun power comes from a SPP (Solar Power Pipe) and gets energy from the sun.
These ways of energy is efficient energy and the plants are small so it will not cost too much to run.
The food will come in every 2 weeks and there is a FC (food chamber) to store the food that comes from the mainland they are meat, bread, rice, milk and vegetables.
And the people push a button and say the food they want it will come to them but if there is an emergency there will be AFM (arterial food maker) that makes man made meat, bread, rice and vegetables.
This is a well-supported Food Maker and you can get any food you want.
The air that keeps the house alive comes from the surface of the earth it gets speeded up by turbines and when it comes down into the house there will be AT’s (air tanks) under ground to store the air to use when there is an emergency and in the house there are more air tanks and they will be showering into the house when there is an emergency and also there is a APC (air pollution cleaner) that cleans the pollution in the air.
It is not artificial air so it is good for the lungs and there is no pollution in the air and it is also well supported.
This house is super well thought out and well built and this home can give you the chance of a lifetime. So scramble in and buy and exclaim at the look of your underwater house.
We want YOU to come and buy an underwater house.
Signed by Sea Water Development Chairman
Daniel John Clarke
I (_________ _______ ______) would like to buy an underwater house contact me at ___ ____
Signed
Samuel Jea Won Lee
Proved By
Daniel James Coats
Jun Huk An
“Hey we finally have our own underwater house” this is what people will be saying in the year 3000. Can you imagine an advanced underwater house capable staying underwater for more than 1000 years? They will first be zapped with a machine, which makes them breathe underwater. Kids will be playing with seahorses and fishes in their air light cloths. Mums will be cleaning their houses and dads will be in their waterproof suits going to work in the sea living development. This houses made by the (SLD) Sea Living Development have lots of special features some of them are air pipes for the air to come in and a food chamber for the food to come in and there is a pipe for the people of the house to go above ground and a energy plant to get energy to the house.
Now I will tell you about these amazing features. (This is not for someone that has heart effects)
Get ready to exclaim!!!
Water will come through a WC1 (water cleaner machine the V1 is put in because if it is just WC it sounds like toilet) first sea water comes into the machine and then the salt in the water will be gone by being destroyed by turbines and clean water comes into the kitchen and hot water will come in by the cold water being heated by a boiler which is powered by solar energy or they can get a WCV2 which is a better version of the WCV1 because it stores the salt and sends it to the meat and vegetables and also stores it for cooking.
This is a 300% salt free salt cleaner and it is pollution free it is a good machine to support the environment
The energy comes from two ways the tidal/hydro power and the solar power the hydropower will be easy to get because it is water all over the place. The sun power comes from a SPP (Solar Power Pipe) and gets energy from the sun.
These ways of energy is efficient energy and the plants are small so it will not cost too much to run.
The food will come in every 2 weeks and there is a FC (food chamber) to store the food that comes from the mainland they are meat, bread, rice, milk and vegetables.
And the people push a button and say the food they want it will come to them but if there is an emergency there will be AFM (arterial food maker) that makes man made meat, bread, rice and vegetables.
This is a well-supported Food Maker and you can get any food you want.
The air that keeps the house alive comes from the surface of the earth it gets speeded up by turbines and when it comes down into the house there will be AT’s (air tanks) under ground to store the air to use when there is an emergency and in the house there are more air tanks and they will be showering into the house when there is an emergency and also there is a APC (air pollution cleaner) that cleans the pollution in the air.
It is not artificial air so it is good for the lungs and there is no pollution in the air and it is also well supported.
This house is super well thought out and well built and this home can give you the chance of a lifetime. So scramble in and buy and exclaim at the look of your underwater house.
We want YOU to come and buy an underwater house.
Signed by Sea Water Development Chairman
Daniel John Clarke
I (_________ _______ ______) would like to buy an underwater house contact me at ___ ____
Signed
Samuel Jea Won Lee
Proved By
Daniel James Coats
Jun Huk An
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